steelcityman

I'm just a WYSIWYG kind of guy … who wears his heart on his sleeve.


This is a poem based loosely on my experiences as a soldier in Northern Ireland in South Armagh.

It’s a bright day in the Province

         And Jack Frost is about

         All’s quiet on watch

         And then, There’s a shout

         The roar of an engine

         The squealing of tyres

         Burning the Tarmac

         Like foul-smelling pyres

         The police station’s gates

         Are closed and locked tight

         But the van doesn’t care

         It’s in it’s death flight

         A pale frightened face

         Is glimpsed through the glass

         As it sped past the sanga

         In it’s deadly last dash

         It burst through the gates

         With a rending of steel

         Shouts of fear and warning

         Rang out loud and clear

         The soldiers inside 

         Back from a three-day patrol

         Had just climbed into bed

         When they heard the call

         To gather their guns 

         And whatever they could

         Flack jackets and boots

         Then get out on the run

         They ran up the road

         And dived into a drain

         With guns pointing outwards

         Just like they’d been trained

         Bomb disposal was called

         Nearby streets were all cleared

         As the chopper was landing

         We all heard the jeers

   Of the tricolour crowd

  Which had gathered to see 

The Death and destruction

That was meant to be

They sent in the robot

To have a first look

with its black rubber tracks

A camera, and hook

As the robot drew near, the crumpled  van roared

Air filled with flame and sharp steel

Brick dust, glass, and an internal door

To add to the squaddie’s ordeal

Three soldiers were injured that Christmas Eve morn

And a republican boy in the crowd

The police station? …. Well, it was gone in the blast

With three of its walls torn down

It’s an endless war, all in God’s name

Steeped in politics of the past

One day, we’ll get out of this game

Green and Orange … together … at last.

(God willing!!)

Any critique is warmly welcomed, as usual. If you don’t like it, please tell me why. If you do like it let me know in the comments

3 thoughts on “THE BOMB

  1. Powerful memories, Pat, and a hopeful message for the future. This is not an easy life experience to revisit. Well-done!

    Sending hugs across the big pond. 💜

    1. steelcityman's avatar steelcityman says:

      Thank you Carol, your comment is very much appreciated. It certainly wasn’t an easy piece to write, though it proved quite cathartic. Thanks for the hugs, I felt them strongly ❤️❤️❤️

      1. Sending my best wishes to you, dear friend. 💜

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